Paragraph Burger Paragraph Burger

Did you know that a burger can help you write a good paragraph?
To make a good paragraph you need to make sure you write about one main idea. You also need to put capital letters in the right spot. Don't forget to put fullstops in the right place at all time!  You also need to edit your writing so it can be more interesting and make sense.
Next time remember to think about a paragraph burger when you want to write a story with paragraphs.

Dog

I have a special dog name Cocoa she is black.

My hoilday

Holiday highlight

In the hoilday I went up North with my mum, sisters, aunty, uncle and cousins. We made a few stops on the way. We went up there to see more of our family that the kids haven't seen before. We went up with vehicles. We stayed in a marae and two baches. It was cool because I saw more of my family. We went diving.