Patrice Narrative Writing 2

One windy stormy day and the sun was slowly going down two people name Samantha and Teddy was planning to go to somewhere. So they put on their Jackets and off they went into Horror Terry. It was on Halloween day so they thought it was scary. They went to the counter and brought two tickets and in they went.

The first thing they went to was the Horror Coaster. They went to Horror Coaster and ask if it was open and the Takeo reply “Yes” so in they went. Samantha was laughing at Teddy because he was screaming but then she started to get scared. The Horror Coaster person Takeo was waiting for them and when it came back Samantha was gone. Teddy was wondering where she was.

The Horror Coaster was close down and Teddy had to get out of the cart.Teddy was wondering where Samantha was and the person Takeo was scared as well. So Teddy went home to plain how to get in there without getting seen.

So Horror Terry was close so Teddy went. But he didn’t plain that there was guards around so he in the parts where there was shadows. He jump over the fence and went to Horror Coaster. He went inside and saw someone so he yelled “Samantha I’m coming” but it was Dr. Richtofen who was hang.

Then he heard a voice that sounded like somebody he knows so he followed it. Then it was getting louder and louder and then Teddy saw Samantha at the tip of his eyes and ran to her. He yelled “Samantha nooooo” but then she replied “Teddy is that you” then Teddy grabbed Samantha and ran out . He didn't realise the guards were there until he saw he saw a light pass his foot and he stood still.

Then he went to a corner and told Samantha “get up and this is our only chance”. So Samantha got up slowly and Teddy gave her a boost up and over the fence. Teddy jump climbed over the fence and drop down next to Samantha. Teddy helped Samantha up and off they went back home.

Rosie Retold

Rosie’s dad bought a  mob of sheep this October shearing. A hunt away dog can gather a mob of sheep. The sheep need to sleep tonight for there shearing tomorrow, its 6 o'clock and rousies tired.

she need to feed the dogs and sheep then she needs to shave the sheep.  she is keeping the pen full of sheep. She needs to keep the wool and sheep clean.

Rosie had to keep the wool of the ground. Then there was more coming so that meant longer work for them. Now all hundred and fifteen hundred of sheep was finished.

Horror Terry

One windy stormy day and the sun was slowly going down two people name Samantha and Teddy was planning to go to somewhere. So they put on their Jackets and off they went into Horror Terry. It was on Halloween day so they thought it was scary. They went to the counter and brought two tickets and in they went.

The first thing they went to was the Horror Coaster. They went to Horror Coaster and ask if it was open and the Takeo reply “Yes” so in they went. Samantha was laughing at Teddy but then she started to get scared. The Horror Coaster person Takeo was waiting for them and when it came back Samantha was gone. He was wondering where she was. The Horror Coaster was close down and Teddy had to get out of the cart.

Teddy was wondering where Samantha was and the person Takeo was scared as well. So Teddy went home to plain how to get in there without getting seen. So Horror Terry was close so Teddy went. But he didn't plain that there was guards around so he in the parts where there was shadows. He jump over the fence and went to Horror Coaster. He went inside and saw Samantha in the corner. So he went to her and picked her up.

Test Patrice

In San Andreas there is a person named Trevor. He grew a garden and someone named Michael was planning to rob the garden. Michael was poor and the only thing that was trouble for robbing was Chop the dog. Chop was a Shepherd that was given by Lamar. Lamar gave Chop to Trevor because he doesn't take care of it well. So Michael knew what he wanted to do so he went off and drew a plan.

Michael was drawing a plan to get Chop out the way so he can only handle Trevor. But he didn’t really want Trevor to see him otherwise Trevor will smash Michael and give it to Chop. So then he planned that if he could wait till night he can do it the easy way and get the crops easily. But he had to wait till the garden was nearly ready so when he gets there it won’t be gone.

So Michael went at 1 am so no one is hardly awake but he didn’t notice that Trevor was awake. Trevor went in the kitchen to have a drink and look out the window to see if the garden was ready. But all the sudden it was gone so he woke up Chop to see if he could smell were the robber went. Michael was walking home all happy and had some fruit in his bag but some was hanging out so Trevor thought it was him.

So Trevor went off and knocked on Michael’s door. Trevor made sure Chop was ready to run after him. But Michael didn't answer the door THE END

N.R.L 2013 Grand Final

In the holiday the grand final was held in Sydney at ANZ stadium. The grand final was between the Mainly Sea Eagles and Sydney Roasters. The score was 26-18 to Roasters. The man of the match was to Daly Cherry Evens. The try scorers was Michel Jennings, Sean-Kenny-Dowel, Daniel Tupou, Aidan Guerra, Jorge Taufua,   Steve Matai, Jamie Lyon

In first half the Roosters leaded by 8-6. Sonny-Bill-Williams was having a bad start of and Glenn Stewart almost got injured in the first minuet. Sonny-Bill-Williams knocks the ball on and Glenn Stewart got smash in a tackle.  

Story Of Framing Fish Retold

In the south pacific oceans there a village called Togori and its in the Solomon islands. If the weather is fine they go out to fish in their canoe’s. They also don’t buy much food from shops so they grow food, harvest food and catch most of the food they get.

Adam uncle Isaiah was planning to try and fish while the weather is bad. His plan’s was to build a pond and put fish in it. So off they went in the morning or at night  and the pools took 1 year and a half to dig and 10 days to fill it up. 3 years went by and they eat the first fish from the pool.

Good Muster

In  reading today, the reading I'm in was doing mating up pictures and words. It was hard and our reading teacher gave us two and help us on one. There was sixteen so we got 13 right if he didn't help us. The one I chose was good muster and in the picture below I think he is putting them back in because they ran off.

Grand Theft Auto V

During the holiday I played Grand Theft Auto V online with my cousin. I was taking turns with him while I was playing with my other cousin. When I started online I started to rob stores and I got two stars from the cops. I use my own car then I got wasted when I first done it.

Then I got back my car because it was pounded and if I don't it will be destroyed. I stool it  back and had to do a getaway from the cops but this time it was one star. I  started to speed and got away from cops.