Patrice Narrative Writing 2

One windy stormy day and the sun was slowly going down two people name Samantha and Teddy was planning to go to somewhere. So they put on their Jackets and off they went into Horror Terry. It was on Halloween day so they thought it was scary. They went to the counter and brought two tickets and in they went.

The first thing they went to was the Horror Coaster. They went to Horror Coaster and ask if it was open and the Takeo reply “Yes” so in they went. Samantha was laughing at Teddy because he was screaming but then she started to get scared. The Horror Coaster person Takeo was waiting for them and when it came back Samantha was gone. Teddy was wondering where she was.

The Horror Coaster was close down and Teddy had to get out of the cart.Teddy was wondering where Samantha was and the person Takeo was scared as well. So Teddy went home to plain how to get in there without getting seen.

So Horror Terry was close so Teddy went. But he didn’t plain that there was guards around so he in the parts where there was shadows. He jump over the fence and went to Horror Coaster. He went inside and saw someone so he yelled “Samantha I’m coming” but it was Dr. Richtofen who was hang.

Then he heard a voice that sounded like somebody he knows so he followed it. Then it was getting louder and louder and then Teddy saw Samantha at the tip of his eyes and ran to her. He yelled “Samantha nooooo” but then she replied “Teddy is that you” then Teddy grabbed Samantha and ran out . He didn't realise the guards were there until he saw he saw a light pass his foot and he stood still.

Then he went to a corner and told Samantha “get up and this is our only chance”. So Samantha got up slowly and Teddy gave her a boost up and over the fence. Teddy jump climbed over the fence and drop down next to Samantha. Teddy helped Samantha up and off they went back home.